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He suddenly appeared. No one summoned him. We all saw the screw holding the cut dry wall in the bathroom. We thought it was to get to the plumbing in the shower. We were unsuspecting people just living our lives. One Sunday morning, Mom went by and a flash of blue caught her eye. She stopped unaware of the consequences that would be wrought in her home. No one would be the same. Jordan popped his head out of his room, “Mom, mom are you okay?” But, she was not okay. DaVondre yelled, “Dad, come quick some thing has happened to...
A sudden crash, and then it was unreal. An action figure, one bought in a bargain bag at a local thrift shop, exploded out of the wall. Mom was open mouth, unable to speak.
Again, DaVondre yelled for Dad, but this time finishing his exclamation, with the word QUICK!
Dad came running and said, “What in the tarnation is going on?”
Jordan shook his head, DaVondre chuckled and Mom blinked and made this noise between laughter and fear.
Dad finally saw the blue action figure and was quick to grab him.
“What the ??, ” the small, but powerful action figure exclaimed. I am here to help, please unhand me, large beast. Dad did just that, unhanded him. In in an instant, as quick as the explosion had happened, the wall again closed up, the figure froze and the air around the bathroom and in the hall stopped the electric buzz that we just noticed. It was eerie, we all saw it, we all heard it, and couldn’t just pretend it didn’t happen.
Mom said, “oh now that was weird.” Jordan said, “We are the luckiest people in the world!” DaVondre said, “Mom? Dad?”
Dad just smiled and said, “Yes, it was weird, and we are lucky, but I just don’t think we know what is going to come next.
(to be continued)
324 words...always the overachiever!
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I love this so much! Just like a real comic book. Are you going to continue the story? I was on the edge of my seat reading when I saw the dreaded "to be continued" Now I want to know what happens next lol.
 
What an awesome page Anne & I know you had fun making it! The colors & photos are just perfect & scream little boy/action story! I'm still not really sure what the heck happened there! Thank you so much for joining the storyteller challenge!
 

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